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Your phenomenal eyes.

  • Writer: Vishnu Udayan
    Vishnu Udayan
  • Aug 3, 2015
  • 1 min read




 In between feathers, lies,

appealing black circles, which,

love only could fantasize. 

So revitalizing they are, with, 

impeccable piquancy filled in.

Peachy and nubile, anyone,

falls for those, that pair; 

Your phenomenal eyes. 


 No word seem enough, 

no tongue seem good, 

uttering anything, just anything, 

is sin to those, arousing stars. 

Like the moon at night, 

like the sun at day, 

like the bulb in darkness,

they shine, all unfettered;

Your phenomenal eyes. 


 A day, not that far, with a rose

followed a dead-straight look

with a crooked smile, 

someone special, would,

offer you a life, with a look

those lithesome circles,

Your phenomenal eyes. 


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Nb : This is a work of fiction. 

I just happened to see a beautiful pair of eyes on a sinewy girl and wrote this.  

Just to make it clear, I am not in love. I am single and not ready to mingle 😉 

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